The Night for Mom
The night insists that I close my eyes
Although Loneliness is my friend
But, I can’t help longing for her,,
She…
Everything that lives in the world
Everithing calls her “Mom”
Loneliness in the night,
You need to hear
Even when
You don’t really want to hear me
Please, Listen to me!
I look forward to getting gentle lullaby from her
Only a short time, I am sure that I would have a nice dream
Loneliness in the night,
Please, look at me!
Teardrops fail
I look forward to seeing the morning soon,
Trust me
I will start doing something better
for her, MOM..
Y2n : May 15, 2009
Malam Untuk Bunda
Sang malam memaksaku tuk menutup kedua mataku
Meski sunyi adalah sahabatku
Namun, tak dapat kupungkiri ku merindukannya,,
Dia…
Semua yang tinggal didunia,,
Semuanya memanggil Dia “Bunda”
Kesunyian di malam hari,
Kau harus mendengar
Meski saat
Kau benar-benar tak ingin mendengarkanku
mohon, dengarkanlah aku!
Ku mengharapkan nyanyian nina bobo darinya
Sebentar saja, pasti aku sudah akan mimpi indah
Kesunyian di malam hari
Mohon, lihat diriku!
Air mata mengalir
Ku mengharapkan esok segera datang
Percayalah kepadaku
Ku akan mulai melakukan sesuatu lebih baik
Untuknya, Bunda....
Y2n : May 15, 2009
4 comments:
What a poetry! Puisi yang bagus. I like your using Subjunctive, look forward to + V ing....I can't help+ V ing. It seems to me that your "language" is improving.
Suggestion:
(instead of saying)I can't help longing with her -- (you could say)I can't help longing for her; (instead of saying) everything calls her with "Mom"--(you could say) Everything calls her "Mom"; (instead of saying)I look forward to coming the morning soon--(you could say)I look forward to seeing the morning soon
Overall, you wrote a very touching poem. It reminds of the many nights i had to pass through without my Mom besides me. Lonely is the night. Yet, your best wish for your Mom kills the loneliness of the night....Good night! Keep on writing Yeyen, I'm looking forward to reading your new Poetry!
Best regard,
Dedi Irwansyah
hmmmm...
keren....
mmmm, pa kabar yen....???
just comment ja dueh...:)
The LOVE is Tall... and the Tallest LOVE.,just for Allah...
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